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Jane Deegan's avatar

To be continued....?? When? I'm hooked

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Grace Anderson-Author's avatar

I’ll have part two up in the next few days ^.^

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Yay! I was listening to when I was driving and I'm like noon! Lol! Looking forward to it

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Grace Anderson-Author's avatar

I’ll send you the link when it goes up ^.^

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Awesome! Thanks, Grace

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Jane Deegan's avatar

Awesome! I just listen to it on my drive. More suspense now!!

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Dead Man Writing's avatar

completely loved. I assume you meant “alone?” No biggie:) can’t wait to see where this goes

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Grace Anderson-Author's avatar

Just fixed that typo. Thanks for catching it. Grammarly screws up like that sometimes

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Dead Man Writing's avatar

Best editing trick I ever learned was to read your piece out loud. It slows your brain down and helps you catch things your mind usually just skips over. It’s not perfect but it works reasonably well

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Grace Anderson-Author's avatar

That’s good advice. I’ll try it.

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FranB's avatar

Intriguing!

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